Five Common Problems with Thesis Statements

by Jessica Ruppert | 26 Dec 2016
Resource Description: This purpose of this lesson is to teach students to properly identify inappropriate components of thesis statements.  
Audience: University
Audience Language Proficiency: Advanced
Duration: 60 minute class period
Language Skill: Writing
Content Area: English for academic purposes 
Materials and Technology: Attached powerpoint supplement and worksheets are needed.  Worksheets are intended to be used for group activity after information is presented via powerpoint.  
Objective(s): Writing/analyzing thesis statements
Outcome(s): Students will be able to write and analyze thesis statements with knowledge of appropriate components necessary for an effective thesis statement.  

Present power point on the five common problems with thesis statements.

 Assign students to groups.

 Have students complete accompanying worksheets in groups to analyze thesis statements for inappropriate content/problems.

Have students rewrite problematic thesis statements as homework assignment.  

Assessment: Assessment of rewritten thesis statements (homework assignment) is used to measure lesson outcomes.  
Differentiation: In subsequent classes, have students demonstrate rewritten thesis statements from homework assignment either on visualizer or whiteboard.  As a class, analyze each thesis statement for appropriateness, effectiveness, and any problems.  Identify the topic and focus of each thesis statement.  
References: Dollahite, N. E., Haun, J., & Dollahitehaun (2011). Sourcework: Academic writing from sources (2nd ed.). Boston: Heinle/Cengage Learning.
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  1. Rasu87 | Mar 13, 2017

    Just now i read this blog content attentively then i have got knowledge about five common problems with thesis statements. I am really so much proud for that. Thank you so much for your good job.

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  6. Union | Jan 23, 2017
    My students frequently have tribulations in writing dissertation announcement. I will use this for student write my dissertations as I want making essential modification while recognize the resource. 
  7. | Jan 14, 2017

    I found this to be an excellent lesson plan. It represents a well structured lesson, complete with teaching notes, tasks through task sheets and finally the appropriate answers for assessment. My students often have problems in writing thesis statements. I will use this in my class, making necessary modifications while acknowledging the source.

    Thank you very much!



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